I pitched my 60 second short film idea to my classmates and friends and received feedback.
Here's what they had to say:
- To show that the protagonist has escaped the mental hospital multiple times before, use props to show this such as make him write his revenge ideas on a piece of paper then toss it into a bin that's filled with paper.
- When filming a flashback sequence, film it in black and white to make it clear that it's an event from the past.
- Use diegetic sounds to reflect his mental stat/emotional - make everything more exaggerated and louder, acting in harmony to what Michael is doing or thinking.
Here is some of the feedback which I have/will act upon:
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